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JD Russell's avatar

Your descripton of the prison is really good. Like I am there with Dibbers and Bee.

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Newton Webb's avatar

Cheers JD, I'm glad you enjoyed it. It's a rare foray into horror comedy for me. I really enjoyed writing it.

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JD Russell's avatar

You also did well with smoothly transitioming between the past and present. That can be difficult for writers to pull off.

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