A Paranormal Horror Short Story: Toby is haunted his entire life by the spectral appearance of a woman in his reflection, who inches closer with time, threatening his sanity and his soul.
Great work. You set the tone and built the sense of dread. You avoided Gothic tropes and gave us a fresh take on what lives in the mirror. We don't know until the end what her relationship is to Toby. I like the development of the piece and the pivot at the end.
Great work. You set the tone and built the sense of dread. You avoided Gothic tropes and gave us a fresh take on what lives in the mirror. We don't know until the end what her relationship is to Toby. I like the development of the piece and the pivot at the end.
Glad you enjoyed Deborah! It was a fun piece to write!