A Supernatural Horror Short Story: After a drunken David tries to seduce Mia while driving, their already dreadful night takes a deadly turn.
I especially liked the opening. Good imagery, distinct sense of who people are, and in only a couple of paragraphs. And it just worked as a short. I personally can't write shorts that work so smoothly unless it's a screenplay for some reason
Glad you enjoyed it Nathan, plenty more coming!
Spag Bol for dinner, anyone? Or should I stick with the lasagne?
I especially liked the opening. Good imagery, distinct sense of who people are, and in only a couple of paragraphs. And it just worked as a short. I personally can't write shorts that work so smoothly unless it's a screenplay for some reason
Glad you enjoyed it Nathan, plenty more coming!
Spag Bol for dinner, anyone? Or should I stick with the lasagne?