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Maureen's avatar

What in the world? Ha! That ending did not make a whole lot of sense. I love that Barnaby attacked the wolf, though. Wait. Did the wolf become the baby?

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Newton Webb's avatar

I might need to rewrite the ending! I was aiming for the baby being left as a sacrifice for the wolf 😅.

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Maureen's avatar

Oh, yep, I definitely missed that. :)

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A E Deakin's avatar

I also thought the wolf became the baby. But really enjoyed the story and the two main characters. Angel was very evilly self righteous.

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Newton Webb's avatar

Yep, definitely got to rewrite the ending :D. Cheers for the feedback!

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